Sunday, July 12, 2009

Tipping the Kale in Our Favor

Tipping the Kale in Our Favor


The Gardener - Old Peasant with Cabbage

By Camille Pissarro

c1890


A Head of Truth


As cabbage leaves, curled ‘gainst the night,

Our blessings may seem locked up tight.

They may look lush,

But out of touch,

Until we set our sights aright.


For, thinking we may toe the line,

We stage a scene of wrong design.

Indulgence pleas

For lives of ease

With lucky leaves and carefree time.


A Gardener tenders every frill,

But first the soil He must till.

What joys be found

In welcome ground

That readies to accept His will.


What flowered kale may us instruct,

If we our doubtings may deduct?

To persevere

And flourish here

Before the cabbage has been plucked.


Posted for a variety of prompts:

Blog Your Blessings Sunday (blessings)

Easy Street Prompts (“locked up tight”)

Meme Express (Sunday invitation to Simply Snickers)

One Single Impression (“thinking”)

Simply Snickers (“line,” “look” and “lush”)

Sunday Scribblings (“indulgence”)

Theme Thursday (“stage”)

Weekend Wordsmith (“lucky”)


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14 notes and comments:

Fledgling Poet said...

This was fantastic! It had such a beautiful lilt and rhythm to it...wonderful to read out loud. Not to mention the deep meaning in the words...

The Dark Lord said...

Brilliant! The words are so poignant, and they go deep.. and they rhyme so delightfully!

Nara Malone said...

I can relate to locked up blessings. This was a lovely way to get this lesson. Thank you.

SandyCarlson said...

Beautifully said. I think all the world can be fond in a garden, past and present and future. So much beautiful intention from sources we can't imagine.

Dee Martin said...

I love the third stanza - beautiful and true

Jane Doe said...

The rhyme and rhythm in this poem is flawless, and the metaphor was wonderfully developed. Fantastic!

Tumblewords: said...

Wonderful, wonderful!

lostmermaid said...

I admire the way u combine so many prompts :) wow !!

Summer said...

Your poem has some really great imagery and lovely sounding verse. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you!

Megha said...

different subject :) Nice.

http://fullofcherries.blogspot.com/2009/07/chance.html

gabrielle said...

I love the rhythm and flow of this poem. And the image of cabbages curled against the night, slowly coming to harvest, is lovely.

Just someone said...

Nice one for all the combination of the prompts!!!

Betsy said...

Now that's what I call 'killing two birds with one stone'...or 12 prompts with one poem! LOL

Baino said...

Who'd have thought to tie a stage in with a cabbage. Full marks for lateral thinking and killing two birds!

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