Maybe sometimes the
Creator makes waves to roll our attention in the right direction. Or is it
simply because the swells delight Him?
Secret Summoning
A terzanelle of call
to tell
A secret sort of summoning,
It rocks me from my tired trail.
A secret sort of summoning,
It’s nature’s calling, all-out wail.
As sand greets water, so I lean.
It rocks me from my tired trail.
Transforming message, ne’er serene,
Sends birds a-flight to whirl away.
As sand meets water, so I lean.
I scarcely sense, but don’t delay
To race the tides before their wave
Sends birds a-flight to whirl away.
A burst of breeze does spirit save.
It chills me so, yet still it dares
To race the tides before their wave.
Somehow I sense the Maker shares
A secret sort of summoning.
It chills me so, yet still it dares –
A secret sort of summoning.
c2016 by Linda Ann Nickerson
A terzanelle is a poetic form which employs a strict rhyme
sequence and the repetition of specific lines. This structure can be tricky to
produce, while maintaining appropriate rhythms and sense, but the result can be
telling indeed.
This poem was posted
in response to these prompts:
31
Days of Poetry and Writing: Write about the most beautiful place Earth has
shown you. (21)
Write
31 Days Challenge: What was the last thing you read, heard, or saw that
inspired you? (21)
OctPoWriMo:
“nature’s calling” – with “rocks,” “water,” “birds,” “trail,” and “sand” –
TERZANELLE POEM (21)
#OctPoWriMo
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I enjoyed your poem!
ReplyDeletea lovely terzanelle, Linda Ann :)
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful and a very interesting poem style with the repeated lines. Have a blessed day. :)
ReplyDeleteImpressive! I appreciate your including the description of the style. I had no idea there even was such a thing.
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