Here's this week's entry for Three Word Wednesday’s prompt on “empty,” “highway” and “ignored.”
We rode along beribboned curls,
Abandoned by titanic girls.
A broken stripe, it marked the pace,
As we tore up the empty space.
My maned companion, Zanzibar,
He carried me to lands afar.
His hoofbeats rattled in discord,
On silent pathways, thus ignored.
The highway, kept to us alone,
A sweet long-distance chaperone,
As there we journeyed, shore to shore,
To leave our home forevermore.
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Oh lovely - kind of haunting. Thanks for the link to the poetry prompt! :)
ReplyDeletei definitely agree it has a mystical quality to it... like a fairy tale.....
ReplyDeleteI like the story line, of being out on the open road with a horse for companion. A strong rhyme and rhythm too.
ReplyDeleteTerrific! I like the magical, mystical and rhythmic quality of this one!
ReplyDeleteI love "beribboned curls." Very cool poem!
ReplyDeleteso very magical!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the link. I will check it out.
It sure feels good to be back!
I totally want to ride a horse now.
ReplyDeleteI'm with TC beause I'd love that ride. ;) Well done!
ReplyDelete...he carried me to lands afar.. dreamlike quality that carrys me farther... beautiful
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ReplyDeletethis is really nicely put :)